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時間:2016-08-09
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本文為大家?guī)?strong>托福作文正文布局,想要得到托福寫作高分是每個托福考生的愿望,那么,在沖刺托福寫作中,有哪些關(guān)鍵的環(huán)節(jié)呢?首先搞定托福寫作文章的整體布局是非常關(guān)鍵的。
正文部分每段安排:
1~3 行 主題句
4~8 行 細(xì)節(jié)論述
1~2 行 主題再現(xiàn)
主題句的要求:
1、要有概括性:
Eg -. When I work in daytime, other people are also working, so I can work more efficiently.
Eg +. Outside environment during daytime helps to promote efficiency in many ways.
解說: TS 一定要概括, 不要寫成反例那樣那么細(xì)節(jié), 不然后面的話不好展開了。
2、避免絕對化:
Eg -. Elder people are efficient.
Eg +. Compared with many un-experienced young people, most experienced elders can work more efficiently.
解說:正例表述得體,尺度很好,有限定成分“most”,有對比說法“compared with”等。
3、避免語法和用詞錯誤。
細(xì)節(jié)論述部分:
1、個人事例推廣到一般:(圖書館有錢該買書還是買電腦)
During the last semester, all the twenty students of my class are required to resort to the British Encyclopedia to complete our final paper.
However, there was only one set in the whole library because it takes a whole shelf to hold and is too expensive to purchase more than one set. Ever since the university bought in the CD version of the British Encyclopedia, we are free to refer to the same article at the same time through different terminals.
This case is not rare, in reality, frequently many readers of the library need to refer to the same source at the sametime.
2、反例:(still 圖書館)
Paper books in the library circulate very fast. Frequently we find a good book lose its good shape within 3 months. Those seldom-borrowed books are not safe at all, in danger ofnatural erosion and worm bites.
解說:不好說電腦好存放的時候,就說書不好存放。
舉反例要適可而止,不能指望全篇用反例來支撐自己的觀點。
3、具體數(shù)據(jù)和引用權(quán)威:
想得4分以上必須注意, 因為4分要求說服力,5分要求appropriateexamples。
Eg.My hometown used to have one million acres of forests. The town people are shortsighted as to sell trees for $10 per piece. Trees are sold at a rate of approximately 100 thousand pieces per year, according to the data from the government.
Professor Selephant from Peking University, one of the bestuniversities in Environmental Engineering, once said, the tress in my hometown will disappear within 10 years at thisspeed of lumbering.
倒數(shù)第二段讓步:
Eg.Admittedly, books do have certain advantages over computers. They are easier to carry with, lower in unit price, and more energy efficient given that computers are driven by electrical power.
However, computers have more valuable merits as an efficient, durable, manageable means for libraries of the new century. I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose computers as my final choice for the investment.
解說:讓步之后一定記得重申 anyway 我還是堅持 XXX 觀點。
用書面語代替口語:
1、短語不夠正式。
2、小詞不夠正式:常見詞替換:
非正式 正式
Buy Purchase
Chance Opportunity
Deep Profound
End Terminate
Help Assistance
Huge Gigantic
Same Identical
Thank Gratitude
Try endeavor
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