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時(shí)間:2019-01-18
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2019年1月12日的雅思考試大作文考到城市規(guī)劃問題,這類話題在雅思考試中出現(xiàn)的頻率也是比較高的,需要引起考生關(guān)注。以下一篇為該題目的滿分范文,一起來看看這樣的題目該怎么寫吧~
When new towns are planned, it is more important to develop public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time in. Do you agree or disagree?
本次題目討論城市規(guī)劃中休閑場(chǎng)所還是商業(yè)場(chǎng)所更重要,屬于同意不同意類型的考題,給出的范文開頭段在介紹背景后對(duì)題目進(jìn)行改寫并顯出自身觀點(diǎn);主體段落分為兩段,首先闡述商業(yè)場(chǎng)所對(duì)城市發(fā)展的重要性,然后強(qiáng)調(diào)休閑場(chǎng)所同樣不可忽視;結(jié)論段強(qiáng)調(diào)主題總結(jié)全文,點(diǎn)出作者立場(chǎng),認(rèn)為休閑場(chǎng)所比商業(yè)場(chǎng)所重要。
范文:
Town planning is a vital aspect of social development and the way in which public spaces are utilized is a key part of that process. It is important for town and city planners to consider carefully what kinds of facilities will be of the greatest benefit to the inhabitants of these areas. It is essential to strike a balance between the aesthetic qualities of the area and its commercial needs.
城市規(guī)劃是社會(huì)發(fā)展的一個(gè)重要方面,而如何使用公共空間又是這一規(guī)劃的關(guān)鍵部分。城市規(guī)劃者必須仔細(xì)考慮什么設(shè)施對(duì)該地區(qū)居民最有利。尋求當(dāng)?shù)孛缹W(xué)品質(zhì)和商業(yè)需求之間的平衡至關(guān)重要。
Certainly, commercial districts are a major factor in the economic growth and development of any town or city. Shopping malls and other retail outlets are key drivers of the local economy, creating demand for goods as well as job opportunities. Without a thriving hub of commercial activity, no town would grow beyond a few hundred people. It is therefore vital to ensure that there is enough commercial activity in the town or city to guarantee its future.
當(dāng)然,商業(yè)區(qū)是任何城鎮(zhèn)經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)和發(fā)展的主要因素。購物中心和其他零售店是當(dāng)?shù)亟?jīng)濟(jì)的主要?jiǎng)恿?,它們產(chǎn)生商品需求和就業(yè)機(jī)會(huì)。沒有一個(gè)繁榮的商業(yè)活動(dòng)中心,任何城鎮(zhèn)的人口都不會(huì)超過幾百人。因此,確保城鎮(zhèn)或城市有足夠的商業(yè)活動(dòng)以保證其未來發(fā)展至關(guān)重要。
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On the other hand, an increasing amount of town planners recognize the importance of developing areas of natural beauty or places of serenity where local residents can unwind. Future, areas that have seen a reduction in leisure and sporting facilities have also witnessed a rise in crime among disaffected youths. Parks, football pitches and swimming centers are a crucial way to provide young people with a sense of purpose and belonging in their local area. Thus, it is important that such facilities are not neglected.
另一方面,越來越多的城市規(guī)劃者認(rèn)識(shí)到開發(fā)自然美景或?qū)庫o場(chǎng)所使當(dāng)?shù)鼐用穹潘缮硇牡闹匾?。此外,休閑和體育設(shè)施減少的地區(qū),叛逆青年的犯罪率也有所上升。公園、足球場(chǎng)和游泳中心是為當(dāng)?shù)啬贻p人提供目標(biāo)感和歸屬感的重要途徑。因此,這些設(shè)施重要性不容忽視。
On the whole, I would argue that increasingly leisure facilities are perhaps more important than shopping centers and commercial districts. As s vast amount commerce now takes place online, there is no longer such a pressing need to build commercial districts. Thus, leisure facilities should take priority.
總的來說,我認(rèn)為越來越多的休閑設(shè)施可能比購物中心和商業(yè)區(qū)更重要。由于現(xiàn)在大量的商業(yè)活動(dòng)都在網(wǎng)上進(jìn)行,建立商業(yè)區(qū)不再是一個(gè)特別迫切的需要。因此,應(yīng)該優(yōu)先考慮休閑設(shè)施。
詞匯積累:
town planning 城市規(guī)劃
a vital aspect 一個(gè)重要方面
social development 社會(huì)發(fā)展
public spaces 公共空間
utilized v.使用
town and city planners 城市規(guī)劃者
facilities n.設(shè)施
be of the greatest benefit 最有利
inhabitants n.居民
strike a balance 尋求平衡
the aesthetic qualities 美學(xué)品質(zhì)
commercial needs 商業(yè)需求
commercial districts 商業(yè)區(qū)
economic growth and development 經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)和發(fā)展
shopping malls 購物中心
retail outlets 零售店
key drivers 主要?jiǎng)恿?/p>
local economy 當(dāng)?shù)亟?jīng)濟(jì)
a thriving hub of commercial activity 一個(gè)繁榮的商業(yè)活動(dòng)中心
grow beyond 超過
vital 至關(guān)重要的
commercial activity 商業(yè)活動(dòng)
guarantee its future 保證其未來
natural beauty 自然美景
places of serenity 寧靜場(chǎng)所
unwind v.放松
leisure and sporting facilities休閑和體育設(shè)施
witnessed a rise 有所上升
disaffected youths 叛逆青年
football pitches 足球場(chǎng)
swimming centers 游泳中心
a sense of purpose and belonging 目標(biāo)感和歸屬感
neglected v.忽視
such a pressing need 一個(gè)特別迫切的需要
take priority 優(yōu)先考慮
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