美國大學申請"軟實力":留學文書寫作技巧與要點提煉！

隨著8、9月份美國留學申請熱季的到來，如何撰寫美國大學申請文書便是準留學生們最為關心的重要內容之一。而美國大學文書材料是申請者提交的“軟實力”證明，因此一份漂亮給力的留學文書，能對美國名校申請起著至關重要的作用。那美國留學文書寫作技巧有哪些呢？下面留學監(jiān)理網(wǎng)的老師從留學文書寫作要點為大家指點迷津。

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拿到眾多材料證明，不知道如何下筆？怎樣寫好美國留學申請文書呢？美國大學文書材料有哪些技巧和要點呢？據(jù)留學圈內資深文書老師經(jīng)驗來看，一般來說，只要抓住下面這幾大寫作要點，那將會對大家的文書撰寫有很大幫助：

A.不要在開頭就為全文做好了總結，有些同學一開頭就寫，去年暑假我參加了殘奧會志愿者活動，從這次活動中我學會了如何與他人溝通協(xié)調。問問自己為什么別人在看了你的開頭后還愿意繼續(xù)讀完全文，如果開頭就做好總結，那也沒有必要讀完全文了。

B.開頭可以留下點懸念，陰謀。

記?。好科恼卤仨氂星抑荒苡幸粋€focus。

要有過渡和承接，使得文章進展地流暢，這些過渡不一定要是in addition, therefore，so之類的寫雅思作文用的詞。過渡的要自然。

C.美國大學留學文書寫作要獨創(chuàng)、新穎。如果寫得比較有創(chuàng)意，再枯燥的主題也能寫出彩。比如：

寫自己參加體操比賽的經(jīng)歷，有人開頭平鋪直敘：我為了參加某次體操比賽，努力訓練了許多周。很boring，但若寫成：我在清晨五點鐘醒來，投入到汗水，眼淚，鮮血混成的高低杠中去，因為我夢想著要把省體操比賽戰(zhàn)利品捧回到我的家鄉(xiāng)來。一下子就奪人眼球了。

做自己，寫自己。除了描述出對你而言有意義的經(jīng)歷事件之外，也寫出你的感悟和思想。

D.不要太刻意弄許多大詞，新詞，怪詞。有些同學的文章老師需要邊翻著詞典才能讀得懂。實在沒有太多必要。其實你的語言功底TOEFL/SAT分數(shù)證實地更有效。

E.使用些形象化的描述，創(chuàng)造比較生動的意象。因為整片文章需要你鮮活的經(jīng)歷作為evidence，如果你寫經(jīng)歷都寫得干巴巴，還能指望文章打動誰-

結尾也很重要。

結尾是給招生官留下最后印象的一部分。不要使用in "in conclusion, in summary, to  conclude之類的總結詞。建議大家寫得稍微幽默一點，招生官每天讀文章讀的很累，好不容易把你文章看完了，如果能在最后讓他幽默一笑，嘴角犯上一絲笑容的話，說不定就讓他記憶深刻了?？梢郧擅畹暮烷_頭相呼應一下。

美國大學留學文書PS范文

(一)自我陳訴、開門見山、直入主題型

I am applying for admission to the Ph.D. program in Electrical and Computer Engineering, at the University of California, Berkeley. I present my research experience and study objectives in this statement of purpose. I would like to build on my solid education and experience as an engineer for a Ph. D. degree in computer science at a distinguished university. I wish in particular to be trained at an advanced level in software systems, database systems, applied-AI and knowledge-based systems. My ultimate goal is to become a professor teaching computer science at a Chinese university. I believe that advanced training in a quality graduate program will help me realize my goal.

(二)敘述故事，說理型 1.敘述自己的家庭故事

My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During my days at Engineering College I used to go to my father's office and help him manage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments. This was the time I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and return are proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock market crashed. But fortunately, my father had a well-diversified portfolio because of which our returns were protected from the downside risk. This was when I learnt the second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reduces risk. While I understood these two principles intuitively, it produced in me a strong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working of Finance. This, I believe, was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind to pursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in Business Administration.

這種申請美國大學文書寫法的優(yōu)點：聯(lián)系家庭，敘述自己。給人感覺親切。

這種美國留學文書寫作寫法的缺點：無法引起讀者的強烈興趣。

(三)引用諺語、名言等。

When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues, the French sculptor Auguste Rodin answered, “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever I don't need.(法國雕塑家羅丹說：“給我一塊大理石，把多余的去掉。”)” For me, life is just a block of marble---whether the marble can be turned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents, diligence and a sense of duty. During over four years’ my college life, I have been dreaming of being a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls’ confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the development of science as men do. For Knowledge Itself Is Power.This is one of my favorite precepts and at this point in my life when I am about to complete my graduation and my future spreads in front of me like a dream, this adage has never influenced my life more than this before.

這種寫法的優(yōu)點：引用諺語、名言來引出自己的觀點，可以顯示出作者有很強的文化底蘊。

這種寫法的缺點：沒有辦法表現(xiàn)突出的個人特色。

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