2018年10月11日雅思考試寫作預(yù)測(cè)機(jī)經(jīng)（附考官最討厭的十種雅思寫作開(kāi)頭）

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1、Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

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范文：

With the global economy being continuously trapped by ongoing slowdown，numerous companies are seeking for effective ways to breast their sales. Under such circumstances, it is not surprising that various sorts of advertisements are heavily bombarding our lives in virtually every front. Some experts believe that commercials, to a large extent, prevent people from pursuing their individuality primarily because they make consumers blindly purchase same products such as the latest electronic gadgets and clothes. I am, however, not convinced by this view.

隨著全球經(jīng)濟(jì)不斷被持續(xù)放緩，許多公司正在尋找刺激銷售的有效方法。在這種情況下，各種各樣的廣告幾乎在每個(gè)方面對(duì)我們的生活進(jìn)行大量的轟炸就不足為奇了。一些專家認(rèn)為，廣告在很大程度上阻礙了人們追求個(gè)性，主要是因?yàn)閺V告讓消費(fèi)者盲目購(gòu)買相同的產(chǎn)品，比如最新的電子產(chǎn)品和衣服。然而，我并不相信這種觀點(diǎn)。

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Admittedly, massive promotion campaigns designed by manufactures could deliberately manipulate consumers’ purchasing behavior towards some specific brands of products and therefore monopolize the market, creating so called trends or fashions over a short period of time.

誠(chéng)然，制造商設(shè)計(jì)的大規(guī)模促銷活動(dòng)可能會(huì)故意操縱消費(fèi)者對(duì)某些特定品牌產(chǎn)品的購(gòu)買行為，從而壟斷市場(chǎng)，在短時(shí)間內(nèi)創(chuàng)造所謂的潮流或時(shí)尚。

However, it is by no means to claim that commercials would influence buyers to such an extent that they all expect to follow the same lifestyle with handsets or dresses designed by globally prestigious corporations. After all, most people choose their favorite products mainly out of personal preferences and affordability. Some luxurious perfumes and handbags, for instance, can only attract some business tycoons living in upper class with strong financial clouts rather than consumers with average incomes, who would not buy products with stylish shapes but with numerous practical functions and reasonable prices, no matter how heavily their makers are willing to spend on commercials. As the ongoing financial crisis drastically dampens people’s purchasing power, this is one of the reasons why it is ridiculous to assume that advertising can block consumers’ sensitivity to prices and qualities.

然而，并不是說(shuō)商業(yè)廣告會(huì)對(duì)消費(fèi)者產(chǎn)生如此大的影響，以至于他們都希望通過(guò)手機(jī)或由全球知名企業(yè)設(shè)計(jì)的服裝來(lái)追求同樣的生活方式。畢竟，大多數(shù)人選擇他們喜歡的產(chǎn)品主要是出于個(gè)人喜好和負(fù)擔(dān)能力。一些奢華的香水和手袋,例如,只能吸引一些商業(yè)大亨生活在上層階級(jí)與強(qiáng)勁的金融影響力,而不是消費(fèi)者平均收入,誰(shuí)不買產(chǎn)品和時(shí)尚的形狀,但許多實(shí)用的功能、合理的價(jià)格,無(wú)論多么嚴(yán)重的廠商愿意花在廣告上。當(dāng)前的金融危機(jī)極大地削弱了人們的購(gòu)買力，這就是為什么認(rèn)為廣告會(huì)阻礙消費(fèi)者對(duì)價(jià)格和質(zhì)量的敏感性是荒謬的。

In conclusion, despite the fact that advertisements do promote sales among different groups of people, we shall not become too conscious and expect that everyone would become fan of Apple computers or Chanel’s clothes. The more likely scenario, by contrast, is that competitions will become increasingly heated as consumers with more and more diversified tastes and needs are prompt in our current crunch time.

總之，盡管廣告確實(shí)促進(jìn)了不同人群之間的銷售，但我們不應(yīng)過(guò)于在意，期望每個(gè)人都成為蘋果電腦或香奈兒服裝的粉絲。相比之下，更有可能出現(xiàn)的情況是，隨著消費(fèi)者的品味和需求越來(lái)越多樣化，在我們當(dāng)前的緊要關(guān)頭，競(jìng)爭(zhēng)將變得越來(lái)越激烈。

2、There is a tendency that news reports in the media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. It is harmful to the individual and to the society. Do you agree or disagree?

范文：

In today’s world, we are surrounded by various kinds of news reports, which have become an essential part of our daily lives. Some people believe that news media should focus on the positive development of the society instead of the negative side. In my point of view, news reports should be objective and unbiased, whether they are good news or bad news.

在當(dāng)今世界，我們被各種各樣的新聞報(bào)道所包圍，它們已經(jīng)成為我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪斜夭豢缮俚囊徊糠?。有些人認(rèn)為新聞媒體應(yīng)該關(guān)注社會(huì)的積極發(fā)展而不是消極的一面。在我看來(lái)，新聞報(bào)道應(yīng)該是客觀公正的，無(wú)論是好消息還是壞消息。

There is a widespread concern that excessive reports on problems may cause panic or instability. For instance, when people are exposed to reports on crimes too often, they tend to lack sense of security. What is worse is the detailed description of the crime cases that makes people uncomfortable. If people become over-cautious, they may lose their trust on other people and it is difficult for them to develop a harmonious interpersonal relationship.

人們普遍擔(dān)心，有關(guān)問(wèn)題的過(guò)度報(bào)道可能導(dǎo)致恐慌或不穩(wěn)定。例如，當(dāng)人們經(jīng)常接觸到犯罪報(bào)告時(shí)，他們往往缺乏安全感。更糟糕的是，犯罪案件的詳細(xì)描述讓人不舒服。如果人們變得過(guò)于謹(jǐn)慎，他們可能會(huì)失去對(duì)別人的信任，很難建立一個(gè)和諧的人際關(guān)系。

Despite the concern mentioned above, we should not ignore the fact that reports on problems and emergencies contribute to the solution of social problems. First of all, these reports draw people’s attention to some serious and urgent issues. For example, when a country suffers from war or natural disasters, the international community reaches their hands immediately to help the victims after they see the news reports. Also, negative reports urge the government to reflect on the deficiency of their administration and make an effort to improve their work. One case that happened in the past few decades is that in some cities the living standard of poor urban population was highly raised after their situation was revealed by the media.

盡管有上述擔(dān)憂，我們不應(yīng)忽視關(guān)于問(wèn)題和緊急情況的報(bào)告有助于解決社會(huì)問(wèn)題這一事實(shí)。首先，這些報(bào)告引起了人們對(duì)一些嚴(yán)重而緊迫的問(wèn)題的關(guān)注。例如，當(dāng)一個(gè)國(guó)家遭受戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)或自然災(zāi)害時(shí)，國(guó)際社會(huì)在看到新聞報(bào)道后立即伸出援助之手。同時(shí)，負(fù)面報(bào)告敦促政府反思其管理的不足，并努力改進(jìn)其工作。在過(guò)去的幾十年里發(fā)生的一個(gè)案例是，在一些城市，貧窮的城市人口的生活水平在他們的情況被媒體揭露后被高度提高。

In conclusion, news reports on the dark side of the society cannot be avoided and in most cases they help to solve social problems and promote the development of the society. But we should also be aware that there is no need to over-react to the negative reports.

總之，關(guān)于社會(huì)黑暗面的新聞報(bào)道是不可避免的，在大多數(shù)情況下，它們有助于解決社會(huì)問(wèn)題，促進(jìn)社會(huì)的發(fā)展。但我們也應(yīng)該意識(shí)到，沒(méi)有必要對(duì)負(fù)面報(bào)道反應(yīng)過(guò)度。

3、There is a tendency that news reports in the media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive developments. It is harmful to the individual and to the society. Do you agree or disagree?

4、Some people think planning future is a waste of time and people should focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

5、In the past, people used to travel abroad to look many differences. Nowadays, places all over the world are more and more similar. What are the causes of the similarity? Do you think the advantages of this problem outweigh the disadvantages?

6、Children's education is expensive. In some countries, the government pay some of or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

7、Many young people leave school with a negative attitude. What are the reasons? How can we encourage young people to study?

8、In some countries old people are highly valued, while in some cultures young people are highly valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

9、Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent on work is very high. Some of them are under high stress and ignore the other parts of life. I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.

10、Recently years, more and more people choose to live by themselves, why? Is it positive or negative for the development of the society?

附：考官最討厭的十種雅思寫作開(kāi)頭

一、中式英語(yǔ)

討厭指數(shù)：★★★★★

上榜理由：用中式英文開(kāi)頭，不僅會(huì)讓考官看不懂，還暴露了你的語(yǔ)言功底，語(yǔ)料積累匱乏，是雅思寫作中的大忌。

比如：

寫作主題 1：The happiest moment in your life

案例：In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

寫作主題 2：The population problem

案例：The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

寫作主題 3：Is there fairness in today’s business world?

案例：I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

二、胡亂翻譯中國(guó)俗語(yǔ)

討厭指數(shù)：★★★★★

上榜理由：胡亂翻譯中國(guó)俗語(yǔ)會(huì)起反作用，畢竟考官對(duì)中國(guó)俗語(yǔ)并不“感冒”，反而會(huì)引起考官反感。

比如：

寫作主題 1：Is it good to have a large family?

案例：I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

寫作主題 2：Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

案例：Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

寫作主題 3：The advantage of being a nice person

案例：I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

三、超級(jí)啰嗦

討厭指數(shù)：★★★★☆

上榜理由：開(kāi)篇就要主題明了清晰，上來(lái)就啰啰嗦嗦表達(dá)不清，考官自然認(rèn)為你的觀點(diǎn)模糊，甚至不會(huì)表達(dá)。

比如：

寫作主題 1：Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

寫作主題 2：Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?

案例：Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

四、偏離主題

討厭指數(shù)：★★★★☆

上榜理由：文不對(duì)題自然會(huì)扣分，給考官留下的印象就是跑題，想想整體寫作分?jǐn)?shù)還會(huì)高么?

比如：

寫作主題：It is said that nowadays one can‘t acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

案例：I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

五、觀點(diǎn)不明朗

討厭指數(shù)：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：雅思大作文很重要的一點(diǎn)就是你的邏輯性和觀點(diǎn)，如果觀點(diǎn)都不明確，后面的舉例證明等都會(huì)缺乏說(shuō)服力，自然分?jǐn)?shù)也不會(huì)高。

比如：

寫作主題：Should college students be allowed to get married?

案例：I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

六、語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤不斷

討厭指數(shù)：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：涉及到雅思寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中的語(yǔ)法多樣性和準(zhǔn)確性，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤不斷自然會(huì)成為扣分點(diǎn)。

比如：

寫作主題：If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

案例：About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility.

七、意思重復(fù)

討厭指數(shù)：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：反復(fù)重復(fù)一個(gè)意思，讓考官會(huì)覺(jué)得你并沒(méi)有什么可以表達(dá)的，或者詞匯表達(dá)能力有限，自然也會(huì)扣分。

比如：

寫作主題：Your opinion on DINK families

案例：My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

八、觀點(diǎn)絕對(duì)化

討厭指數(shù)：★★★☆☆

上榜理由：考生在使用語(yǔ)言描述事物或者表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)，應(yīng)盡可能避免語(yǔ)言過(guò)于絕對(duì)化，更應(yīng)該注意該語(yǔ)言中非絕對(duì)化表達(dá)方式的學(xué)習(xí)，這樣才能盡顯文章內(nèi)容的客觀性。

比如：

寫作主題 1：The importance of confidence

案例：In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

寫作主題 2：The solution to the traffic problem

案例：I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

九、內(nèi)容過(guò)分簡(jiǎn)單

討厭指數(shù)：★★☆☆☆

上榜理由：考官想給你打分都沒(méi)有內(nèi)容，所以切記盡量豐富內(nèi)容，尤其不要照搬題目。

比如：

寫作主題：The importance of environmental protection

案例：This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

十、用詞不當(dāng)

討厭指數(shù)：★★☆☆☆

上榜理由：用詞不當(dāng)會(huì)暴露你的詞匯，而且評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中談到“在不同的語(yǔ)境中，使用正確的詞性;”所以在使用詞匯的時(shí)候，正確性也是非常重要的。如果想要取得更高的分?jǐn)?shù)，那么詞匯的多樣性也要更多的納入考慮。切記，不要用口語(yǔ)化的表達(dá)!

比如：

寫作主題 1：The importance of confidence

案例：In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

寫作主題 2：The solution to the traffic problem

案例：I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

總結(jié)

1.開(kāi)頭切記不要用中式英語(yǔ)表達(dá)，多積累地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)。

2.表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)要客觀明確，切勿模棱兩可絕對(duì)化。

3.內(nèi)容要清晰明了，切勿反復(fù)啰嗦，也不能一句話代之。

4.注意詞性使用，減少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，不要生搬硬套“華麗辭藻”。

總之，在備考雅思寫作的時(shí)候還是要多多積累豐富的素材，學(xué)習(xí)地道的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)方式，一定要多動(dòng)手寫!!!不斷地練習(xí)和修改，才能提升雅思寫作能力。

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