雅思口語(yǔ)Part 2之高分范文——需要改進(jìn)的公共場(chǎng)所

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Topic:

Describe a public place that needs improvements.

You should say:

Where it is

What it is like

Why you think it needs improvements

And explain how to make it better

解析：題目要求考生描述一個(gè)“需要改進(jìn)的公共場(chǎng)所”。作答要點(diǎn)包括：場(chǎng)所的地點(diǎn)；場(chǎng)所的現(xiàn)狀；為什么需要改進(jìn)；如何改進(jìn)。

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Sample 1:

The public place that I think need improvements is the community library near my home. I often go there after work, probably twice a week.

我認(rèn)為需要改進(jìn)的公共場(chǎng)所是我家附近的社區(qū)圖書(shū)館。我經(jīng)常下班后去那里，大概一周兩次。

Speaking of what it is like, I have to first admit that, there actually are several aspects I like about this library. The first thing I appreciate about it, is its whole atmosphere. Every time I walk into the library, I can see people at all ages reading books, watching movies, surfing the Internet, and discussing warmly about some questions, which makes me feel really peaceful after a tiring day of work. The second thing that I like about it, is its large collection of books. It not only has a huge amount of books written in Chinese, but also a lot of books printed in English, German and other foreign languages.

說(shuō)到它是什么樣子，我必須首先承認(rèn)，實(shí)際上我喜歡這個(gè)圖書(shū)館的幾個(gè)方面。我首先欣賞的是它的整個(gè)氛圍。每次我走進(jìn)圖書(shū)館，我都能看到各個(gè)年齡段的人在看書(shū)，看電影，上網(wǎng)，熱烈地討論一些問(wèn)題，這讓我在勞累了一天的工作后感到很平靜。我喜歡它的第二個(gè)方面是它的大量藏書(shū)。它不僅有大量的中文書(shū)籍，也有大量的英文、德文和其他外語(yǔ)書(shū)籍。

Despite all those things I love about this library, I do feel that certain changes should be made to make it an even better place for people to read and relax. The biggest problem I feel necessary for the library to tackle, is that there are no quiet study rooms provided. In other words, people in this library are allowed to talk to each other wherever they want to, which in a way, may cause huge inconvenience for those who want to study or read in a quiet environment. To be frank, this has been troubling me for quite a while. I remember there was a time when I went to the library, trying to find a quiet corner so that I can then take my time to appreciate one of my favorite books, On the Road, but sadly wasn’t able to do it thanks to consistent talking around me. It was this experience that struck me that the library might have to consider setting up a study room, where people can read and think peacefully with no disturbance. In addition, I have also noticed that the chairs provided by the library may not be enough, especially on weekends when people start to swarm in from the beginning of the day.

盡管我很喜歡這個(gè)圖書(shū)館，但我覺(jué)得應(yīng)該做一些改變，讓它成為一個(gè)更適合人們閱讀和放松的地方。我覺(jué)得圖書(shū)館要解決的最大問(wèn)題是，沒(méi)有安靜的自習(xí)室。換句話說(shuō)，在這個(gè)圖書(shū)館里，人們可以在任何他們想交談的地方交談，這在某種程度上可能會(huì)給那些想在安靜的環(huán)境中學(xué)習(xí)或閱讀的人帶來(lái)巨大的不便。坦率地說(shuō)，這一直困擾我很長(zhǎng)時(shí)間。我記得有一次我去圖書(shū)館，想找個(gè)安靜的角落，這樣我就可以花時(shí)間欣賞我最喜歡的一本書(shū)《On the Road》，但不幸的是，由于我周圍不斷的交談，我沒(méi)能做到這一點(diǎn)。正是這個(gè)經(jīng)歷觸動(dòng)了我，圖書(shū)館可能不得不考慮設(shè)立一個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)室，在那里人們可以平靜地閱讀和思考，不受干擾。另外，我也注意到圖書(shū)館提供的椅子可能不夠用，尤其是在周末，人們從早上開(kāi)始就開(kāi)始蜂擁進(jìn)來(lái)。

Well, in order to deal with these two problems, I think the library should set up some study rooms, and equip this place with more chairs as soon as possible.

嗯，為了解決這兩個(gè)問(wèn)題，我認(rèn)為圖書(shū)館應(yīng)該建立一些自習(xí)室，盡快在這個(gè)地方安裝更多的椅子。

Sample 2:

Well, I would like to talk about a path in my neighborhood, which really needs to be improved. Even talking about it makes me mad.

嗯，我想談?wù)勎壹腋浇囊粭l路，這條路確實(shí)需要改進(jìn)。甚至談?wù)撍甲屛野l(fā)瘋。

Actually, the path is right in front of our apartment building, and it's the only way that we can take when we go out. Basically, it is uneven, filled with sand and stone, which is very dusty when there are cars going by. Plus, it becomes even worse, like muddy when it rains, so the residents in my community have to walk on this little path with extra attention because we are afraid of being tripped. That must be very painful, you know.

實(shí)際上，這條路就在我們的公寓樓前面，這是我們外出時(shí)唯一能走的路?；旧?，它是不平的，布滿了沙子和石頭，當(dāng)有汽車經(jīng)過(guò)的時(shí)候，全是塵土。而且，下雨時(shí)道路泥濘，會(huì)變得更糟，所以我們社區(qū)的居民不得不格外小心地走在這條小路上，因?yàn)槲覀兒ε卤唤O倒。你知道，那一定很痛苦。

One third of the residents in the neighborhood are children and old people. It's very dangerous for them to walk on this risky road every day or even several times a day. Some old people like to do square dance in the evening, and this little road makes it even impossible. By the way, young people do not like it either, because it is not convenient, on the one hand, for us to go in and go out. It makes us look bad when we invite guests to our home when they see this shabby path. And it is definitely not in line with the artistic design of the buildings in the community.

這個(gè)社區(qū)三分之一的居民是兒童和老人。他們每天走在這條危險(xiǎn)的路上，甚至一天走幾次，都是很危險(xiǎn)的。有些老人喜歡在晚上跳廣場(chǎng)舞，而這條小路使這一切都變得不可能。順便說(shuō)一句，年輕人也不喜歡它，因?yàn)樗环矫娌环奖阄覀冞M(jìn)出。當(dāng)我們邀請(qǐng)客人到我們家做客時(shí)，當(dāng)他們看到這條破舊的小路時(shí)，我們會(huì)顯得很糟糕。而且它絕對(duì)不符合社區(qū)建筑的藝術(shù)設(shè)計(jì)。

I think to change the situation, we need to get both the government and management of the building involved, because it is really a big deal, and it's related to the welling-being of the people here. The government should invest money in the construction work on the path, like to pave it with asphalt to make it smooth. Management people can decorate the path with plants such as flowers and trees etc.

我認(rèn)為要改變現(xiàn)狀，我們需要讓政府和建筑的管理部門(mén)都參與進(jìn)來(lái)，因?yàn)檫@真的是一件大事，它與這里人民的福祉有關(guān)。政府應(yīng)該在道路上投資建設(shè)工程，比如鋪瀝青使之平整。管理人員可以用花草樹(shù)木等植物來(lái)裝飾道路。

If the problem is solved, old people can dance there, and children can play games and their parents don't have to be worried about them. The whole environment of the community will look nicer and cozier. In fact, it is not difficult to get it done, but it has been there since we moved in three years ago. Nobody has brought it up but everybody is fed up with it. I think it is time that we worked together to report it to the government. Anyway, it should be dealt with as soon as possible.

如果問(wèn)題解決了，老人可以在那里跳舞，孩子們可以玩游戲，他們的父母不必?fù)?dān)心他們。整個(gè)社區(qū)的環(huán)境看起來(lái)會(huì)更美好、更舒適。事實(shí)上，完成它并不難，但自從我們?nèi)昵鞍徇M(jìn)來(lái)，它一直是那樣。沒(méi)人提起這件事，但每個(gè)人都受夠了。我認(rèn)為現(xiàn)在是我們一起向政府報(bào)告這件事的時(shí)候了。無(wú)論如何，應(yīng)該盡快處理。

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