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時間:2016-12-12
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題目:
Some people think they can use as much fresh water as they want; while others think that the fresh water should be tightly controlled by government because it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
解析:
本題是一道非?!耙?guī)矩”的雙邊論證并提出自己觀點的議論文寫作題目。大家在寫作的時候可以參考下面的寫作套路:
第一段:開頭,概述2種不同的觀點;
第二段:復述一方觀點,并舉例論證;
第三段:復述另一方觀點,并舉例論證;
第四段:給出自己的觀點并解釋說明。
注意事項:
在寫這類文章的時候,同學們比較容易范的錯誤就是在首段提出自己的觀點之后,就對自己的觀點進行論述,而忽略了對提干中的觀點的論述。不要忘記,題目要求我們discuss both views,之后才是給出自己的觀點。
下面,我們就來看一看留學監(jiān)理網的老師為大家提供的范文,供大家學習和參考。
Sample Answer:
There has been a heated debate on the use of fresh water in our society for a while. People hold 2 different opinions, one of which goes that “we can use it freely” and the others argue the use of fresh water should be controlled by our government.
Some people claim “we should use fresh water as much as we wish”. Their reason is quite simple—people pay the water fee monthly due to the volume of water they used last month. In other words, the water fee and the volume of water you use are in direct proportion. The range of the fee is varied according to the season, weather and the number of people in a certain household. When in summer, a family of 3 may need more water than in winter as they tend to take a bath every day. As they use more water, they pay more consequently.
On the other hand, as fresh water is limited resource, people, especially who are environmentalists, hope the government can control the use of fresh water. In order to make it work, the government may announce a standard of water used by each person each month. By doing this, people will not waste water and by extension it will protect the fresh water resource.
For me, it is crucial to raise the awareness of the protection of limited resource, for example fresh water. The government should educate everyone that fresh water is limited resource and important for our daily life, industrial manufacture and agricultural production. By doing so, people will save as much fresh water as they can. And I do believe it will work better than any rules and policies.
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以上就是我們留學監(jiān)理網的老師為大家整理的12月10日雅思考試大作文的解析和范文。希望可以幫助大家備考。
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