雅思寫作高分范文解析

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高分范文：

　Modern buildings are appearing in large numbers but some people believe that we should build our buildings in traditional styles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

　　In recent years， an interesting trend has emerged. Countries with long histories and rich cultures have been modernizing the quickest， especially in terms of architecture. Many have criticized this as not respecting traditional culture. While traditional architecture should be protected， however， I feel it is not necessary to stop building modern structures as we move forward.

　　One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable to live and work in. While traditional buildings might look nice from the outside， they are often not very user-friendly. Modern buildings usually have lots of windows and light and are clean and energy efficient. Surely this will make those inside them happier.

　　Another point to consider is that modern buildings will give a good impression to those visiting from abroad. Consider Beijing during the Olympics， for example. Many foreigners were surprised to see all of the stunning new building designs. In the long run， this will probably attract more business and tourists to the country.

　　Of course， traditional architecture still has its value. Everyone loves visiting famous historical places and admiring architectural styles from throughout history. We should protect and appreciate such places for future generations， but at the same time， we don’t have to live in the past.

　　Ultimately， each city needs to find its own balance between “old” and “new” when it comes to building styles， but modern buildings are for sure a positive thing. After all， if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.(264 words)

寫作線索：首段，現(xiàn)代建筑必要;第二段，因為現(xiàn)代建筑的實用性和舒適性;第三段，代表城市現(xiàn)代化;第四段;讓步，傳統(tǒng)建筑的價值。末段總結。

　　文中第三段的觀點不夠有力。其實現(xiàn)代建筑的優(yōu)點直接分實用性和舒適性兩個段落來重點闡述即可。比如實用性，現(xiàn)代化都市人口密度比以前大，摩天大樓skyscraper提高了城市土地的使用效率。

　　本文末句很有趣味，再仔細讀讀：After all， if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.(畢竟，如果我們不繼續(xù)開發(fā)新建筑的風格，我們的下一代將不會知道我們這一代的歷史是什么樣)歷史是相對的，對于我們的子孫來說，我們現(xiàn)在的現(xiàn)代化建筑將成為他們眼里的古代建筑。

　　建議大家學習下面的詞匯和短語，然后再重讀范文，體會它們在文中的運用

詞匯：

　　emerge vi.顯現(xiàn)出來

　　architecture n.建筑物

　　practical adj.實用的

　　user-friendly adj.用戶友好的，方便用戶使用的

　　stunning adj.足以使人暈倒的，極好的

　　admire v.贊美，欽佩，羨慕

　　ultimately adv.最后，

短語

　　in terms of在。..方面

　　move forward前進

　　in the long run從長遠看

　　for sure確實

　　after all 畢竟

　　let sb. do sth. 讓某人做某事

　　三分鐘熟讀或背誦本文最實用的三個句子

　　In recent years， an interesting trend has emerged.

　　One reason for this is that modern buildings are more practical and comfortable to live and work in.

　　After all， if we don’t continue to explore new building styles we won’t be able to let future generations know what our period of history was like.

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