美國留學(xué)MBA申請文書中的三大錯誤點，千萬不要犯!

眾所周知，MBA作為美國大學(xué)商科領(lǐng)域的重要分支，該專業(yè)的申請競爭壓力一直非常激烈，而大家想要在眾多申請者中脫穎而出，除了必要的托福成績、GPA分數(shù)等硬性指標(biāo)之外，留學(xué)文書的作用不能忽視。下面留學(xué)監(jiān)理網(wǎng)的小編來為大家分享美國留學(xué)MBA申請文書中的三大錯誤點，希望引起大家注意。

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MBA，全稱Master of Business   Administration，翻譯為中文則為工商管理碩士。MBA起初誕生于美國，經(jīng)過百年的探索和努力，它培養(yǎng)了為數(shù)眾多的優(yōu)秀工商管理人才，創(chuàng)造了美國經(jīng)濟發(fā)展的神話和奇跡。MBA被譽為"天之驕子"和“管理精英”，成為企業(yè)界乃至社會敬重和羨慕的特殊人物，甚至在公眾心目中被視為“商界英雄”。

而想要寫出一份漂亮的，讓美國大學(xué)招生官滿意的MBA留學(xué)申請文書，那下面這三大錯誤點，一定要避免：

美國留學(xué)MBA申請文書中的錯誤點1：實踐經(jīng)歷與個人成長分離

這是很多申請美國MBA的學(xué)生最開始時經(jīng)常犯的錯誤，忽視了物、我兩者的平衡。物，可以理解為課外活動、實習(xí)經(jīng)歷、志愿者經(jīng)歷及工作經(jīng)歷。我，理解為活動及經(jīng)歷中的收獲、反思及成長。比如要求申請者寫一次活動或者印象   深刻的經(jīng)歷，很多申請者的文章通篇寫某此活動的時間、地點、內(nèi)容，我擔(dān)任什么職務(wù)，做了什么。這樣寫是不合適的，因為美國學(xué)校更看重的是MBA申請人作為一個“人”，你是否善于從過往經(jīng)驗中吸取經(jīng)驗教訓(xùn)，是否有獨立的判斷及思考能力，通過這個活動經(jīng)歷看出想去國外讀MBA的你有哪方面的品質(zhì)。

美國留學(xué)MBA申請文書中的錯誤點2：整篇文章“形、神”分離

本科和研究生申請者的文書中有不同的表現(xiàn)。比如，本科申請者文書內(nèi)容中太多散文化的心理描寫、太少過往實際經(jīng)歷，導(dǎo)致文章太空洞。美國MBA本科申請者要明確的是申請文書本質(zhì)上是要體現(xiàn)自身能力和素質(zhì)，因此扎實的內(nèi)容是基礎(chǔ)，在此基礎(chǔ)上，來尋求文章表達方式和內(nèi)容的統(tǒng)一。

美國留學(xué)MBA申請文書中的錯誤點3：各種素材主次不分

例如有一個學(xué)生到美國MBA留學(xué)申請應(yīng)用數(shù)學(xué)的研究生，經(jīng)歷比較豐富，大學(xué)時是學(xué)?；顒拥姆e極參與者和組織者，比如十佳社團組織者、校園歌手之類，專業(yè)課成績也   很優(yōu)秀。但是作為一個理工科的申請者，僅有這些是遠遠不夠的。了解到學(xué)生在大二時，參加過一次針對西南地區(qū)媒體生存狀況的調(diào)查，而調(diào)查中，學(xué)生作為唯一數(shù)學(xué)專業(yè)的學(xué)生，負責(zé)數(shù)據(jù)的統(tǒng)計與模型分析。申請學(xué)生認為當(dāng)時的工作比較簡單，所以沒有放在文書中，這顯然是在舍本逐末。

作為理工科研究生申請者，建議學(xué)生重點需要在文書中突出專業(yè)能力和專業(yè)實習(xí)經(jīng)驗，這些比社團或歌手等活動重要的多。

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明白了上面這些內(nèi)容之后，為了保證大家更多的準備出一份漂亮的達標(biāo)的美國留學(xué)申請文書，下面隨小編一起來看下美國大學(xué)對MBA專業(yè)最新的文書題目要求：

2017年哈佛大學(xué)商學(xué)院MBA專業(yè)申請文書題目

ESSAY

There is one question for the Class of 2019:

As we review your application, what more would you like us to know as we   consider your candidacy for the Harvard Business School MBA program?

There is no word limit for this question. We think you know what guidance   we’re going to give here. Don’t overthink, overcraft and overwrite. Just answer   the question in clear language that those of us who don’t know your world can   understand.

LETTER OF RECOMMENDATION QUESTIONS

How do the candidate’s performance, potential, background, or personal   qualities compare to those of other well-qualified individuals in similar roles?   Please provide specific examples. (300 words)

Please describe the most important piece of constructive feedback you have   given the applicant. Please detail the circumstances and the applicant’s   response. (250 words)

2017年哥倫比亞大學(xué)商學(xué)院MBA專業(yè)申請文書題目

哥倫比亞大學(xué)商學(xué)院是美國頂級商學(xué)院，哥大商學(xué)院申請者必須回答一個簡短的問題以及提交3篇Essay。

以下內(nèi)容摘自哥倫比亞大學(xué)商學(xué)院官網(wǎng)：

Essays

Applicants must complete one short answer question and three essays.

Short Answer Question:

What is your immediate post-MBA professional goal? (51 characters   maximum)

Examples of possible responses:

“Work in business development for a media company.”

“Join a strategy consulting firm.”

“Launch a data-management start-up.”

Essay 1:

Through your resume and recommendations, we have a clear sense of your   professional path to date. What are your career goals going forward, and how   will the Columbia MBA help you achieve them? (100-750 words)

Essay 2:

Columbia Business School’s students participate in industry focused New York   immersion seminars; in project based Master Classes; and in school year   internships. Most importantly, our students are taught by a combination of   distinguished research faculty and accomplished practitioners. How will you take   advantage of being “at the very center of business”? (100-500 words)

Essay 3:

CBS Matters, a key element of the School’s culture, allows the people in your   Cluster to learn more about you on a personal level. What will your Clustermates   be pleasantly surprised to learn about you? (100-250 words)

Optional Essay:

An optional fourth essay will allow you to discuss any issues that do not   fall within the purview of the required essays.

推薦信

We ask recommenders to consider the following guidelines when writing their   recommendations (recommended limit - 1000 words):

How do the candidate's performance, potential, background, or personal   qualities compare to those of other well-qualified individuals in similar roles?   Please provide specific examples.

Please describe the most important piece of constructive feedback you have   given the applicant. Please detail the circumstances and the applicant's   response.

2017年密歇根大學(xué)安娜堡商學(xué)院MBA專業(yè)申請文書題目

ESSAYS

What are you most proud of and why? How does it shape who you are today? (400   words)

What is your desired career path and why? (400 words)

TEAM EXERCISE

Not required but highly recommended

LETTER OF RECOMMENDATION QUESTIONS

(only one letter required)

1.How do the candidate’s performance, potential, or personal qualities   compare to those of other well-qualified individuals in similar roles? Please   provide specific examples. (300 words)

2.Please describe the most important piece of constructive feedback you have   given the applicant. Please detail the circumstances and the applicant’s   response. (250 words).

2017年麻省理工學(xué)院MBA專業(yè)申請文書題目

ESSAYS

Cover Letter: Please submit a cover letter seeking a place in the MIT Sloan   MBA Program. Your letter should conform to a standard business correspondence   and be addressed to Mr. Rod Garcia, Senior Director of Admissions. (250 words or   fewer)

Resume: Please submit a resume that includes your employment history and   academic record in reverse chronological order. Other information appropriate to   a business resume is welcomed and encouraged. (no more than 1 page in   length)

LETTERS OF RECOMMENDATION

MBA applicants must submit two letters of recommendation. Please choose   recommenders who are able to provide specific answers to the following   questions:

1.How long and in what capacity have you known the applicant?

2.How does the applicant stand out from others in a similar capacity?

3.Please give an example of the applicant’s impact on a person, group, or   organization.

4.Please give a representative example of how the applicant interacts with   other people.

5.Which of the applicant’s personal or professional characteristics would you   change?

6.If you are an academic/technical recommender, please tell us how well the   applicant mastered the subject you taught or supervised and in what ways did the   applicant demonstrate this mastery.

7.Please tell us anything else you think we should know about this   applicant.

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